ext_77204 ([identity profile] kokoda2007.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starbright73 2008-09-17 03:31 am (UTC)

\o/
At last, the wait is over - and you didn't disappoint (not that I ever thought you would).

I love this bit:

"School had become a sad excuse of a safe haven; free from constant critique about how much less he was in comparison to Dean, from unspoken disapproval and the growing sensation of never being enough. He didn't quite fit in at school either, but at least he was able to soak in how life was supposed to be. And it sure as hell wasn't what he had."

You have set the whole scene so beautifully and I love the way you 'get into' the heads of the Winchester's.

Eagerly awaiting for the next chapter - need I hint more strongly?

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