ext_19781 ([identity profile] coell.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starbright73 2008-09-23 09:38 am (UTC)

:-D

Good update!

There's a quote paragraph with some punctuation issues, but one quick fix is:

"despite it being to wide for him."

Should be "too".
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